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Post by lurky.carla_x on Aug 12, 2013 9:22:41 GMT -6
Sure! I'd love to see what you have. -nods-
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Post by ohHEY_teej. on Aug 12, 2013 9:25:05 GMT -6
It's not much, but it's growing. -nods- Here you go!
"If there was one thing to be pointed out about Adonis Chaille, it was his bizarrely good looks. Bizarrely? Why yes, bizarrely. The boy, of French descent, had developed into quite the character among the halls of Hogwarts and there were no signs of that changing anytime soon. A healthy ten years since the war, things were as close to being back to normal as they were ever going to get. Those of Slytherin still disliked or felt superior to everyone else with the exception of a few, and students of Gryffindor still held the best grudges of any house. Seen studying around every corner were those of Rowena Ravenclaw's' house, within a close proximity to the happy-go-lucky followers of Helga Hufflepuff."
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Post by lurky.carla_x on Aug 12, 2013 9:27:21 GMT -6
Ohhhh very nice so far! -nods-
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Post by ohHEY_teej. on Aug 12, 2013 9:27:43 GMT -6
More is being added between the part about Adonis's good lucks and the part about him being French. I realized I left that area a little too bland. -nods- Fixing now.
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Post by lurky.carla_x on Aug 12, 2013 9:30:45 GMT -6
Well I definitely like what you have so far. You are a very good writer.
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Post by ohHEY_teej. on Aug 12, 2013 9:31:51 GMT -6
-bows- Thank you, thank you! I have came quite a long way.
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Post by lurky.carla_x on Aug 12, 2013 9:33:47 GMT -6
I'm still learning on how to make a good post. Some people may say I have good posts then others will say I ramble. -shrugs- It's like you can never make someone happy.
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Post by ohHEY_teej. on Aug 12, 2013 9:39:17 GMT -6
It happens to all of us. Sooner or later, IF there are imperfections with your posts... YOU will fix them, no one else. People do not realize that there harsh words do not always help situations of criticism.
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Post by lurky.carla_x on Aug 12, 2013 9:40:01 GMT -6
No they don't. They make you not want to RP with them if they nick pick every post -shrugs-
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Post by ohHEY_teej. on Aug 12, 2013 9:45:45 GMT -6
I am more of a constructive kind of guy. If I see something that I feel you could be even better at, I'll tell you. I like to see people perform at their very best. Especially capable people. -nods- No one is a lost cause in my eyes.
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Post by lurky.carla_x on Aug 12, 2013 9:50:37 GMT -6
That's different than people critizing everything you do. If I feel the person is trying to help me then that's fine. -nods- I used to ask my girlfriend twenty times after I would post to her to make sure it was okay. -laughs-
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Post by ohHEY_teej. on Aug 12, 2013 9:55:56 GMT -6
Aww, that's sweet. -smiles- -snugs- Go look at what I have so far. I am not done with it, but my Word program is unreliable so I posted it here so as not to lose it. -nods-
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Post by lurky.carla_x on Aug 12, 2013 10:03:46 GMT -6
Ooooooh I like how it's going so far.
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Post by ohHEY_teej. on Aug 12, 2013 10:04:27 GMT -6
Could you delete the first one? I didn't mean to post it in the plotting section. I tried to delete it, but I don't think I have that authority. -nods-
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Post by lurky.carla_x on Aug 12, 2013 10:06:22 GMT -6
Done and done. -smiles-
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